tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2723293579636026186.comments2010-12-05T22:41:58.133-08:00Hailey TaylorHaileyTaylorhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05155631448230253649noreply@blogger.comBlogger20125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2723293579636026186.post-85045693012449785932010-12-05T22:41:58.133-08:002010-12-05T22:41:58.133-08:00Good responses...need one more image for [1] and a...Good responses...need one more image for [1] and annotation for [3]natalie lentz wallhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14455592439753428431noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2723293579636026186.post-13858482988624925832010-11-12T07:02:31.786-08:002010-11-12T07:02:31.786-08:00Well done Hailey! I agree with you on your point o...Well done Hailey! I agree with you on your point of view about Revolution and also about describing modern, because in my opinion is just a very varietal factor, that makes life so interesting.Jasmine Collinshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16147952474276766672noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2723293579636026186.post-25738685504424283402010-11-11T07:50:31.981-08:002010-11-11T07:50:31.981-08:00I like how you defined the momentum of change. It ...I like how you defined the momentum of change. It is good to make the connection to the appreciation of history as it will always provide a blueprint for the future.noooooohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01475171460170443304noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2723293579636026186.post-24696466731371833952010-11-09T18:51:17.232-08:002010-11-09T18:51:17.232-08:00good observations.good observations.patrick lee lucashttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04150478481310659062noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2723293579636026186.post-79304177874607289812010-10-29T06:53:27.312-07:002010-10-29T06:53:27.312-07:00[1]nice work [2]good [3] nice plan [4]good job
ov...[1]nice work [2]good [3] nice plan [4]good job<br /><br />overall, great job on paying attention to all the details in a clear and concise mannernatalie lentz wallhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14455592439753428431noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2723293579636026186.post-66645583508964959762010-10-17T20:38:16.718-07:002010-10-17T20:38:16.718-07:00Excellent and well written. Fabulous image well ch...Excellent and well written. Fabulous image well chosen. The emphasis put on each culture was clearly dramatized and well thought out.<br />good J_O_B.Interior Designerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07372266534315995309noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2723293579636026186.post-90686904616139580382010-10-15T14:01:26.548-07:002010-10-15T14:01:26.548-07:00Your essay was detailed and clearly went through w...Your essay was detailed and clearly went through what we discussed in this unit. Your picture relates back to the first structures in Egypt to express the foundation of architecture. The word count is above what was needed but you didn't ramble.Katherinehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06751106002633037077noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2723293579636026186.post-54299275684906240632010-10-15T10:05:39.216-07:002010-10-15T10:05:39.216-07:00Great synthesization on the ideas of centrality in...Great synthesization on the ideas of centrality in regards to each civilization. <br /><br />Interesting points on horizontal stacking in relation to Grecian order.<br /><br />Concluding statement and image looks to our time and our expression of ancient fundamentals.Carlos Smithhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15334237615278929675noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2723293579636026186.post-89547477766764876672010-10-13T20:37:09.917-07:002010-10-13T20:37:09.917-07:00Hailey! my group buddy... Just wanted to start out...Hailey! my group buddy... Just wanted to start out saying you definitely reached 500 words! Trust me, I did the same, once you start going, it's hard to stop. It was great that you separated each civilization clearly, completely easy to understand. The quality of your essay is good, you touched on everything you needed to. The picture use is great, refers you back to ancient Egypt.annasophiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10273469169984964915noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2723293579636026186.post-11147924810929134152010-10-12T19:52:01.392-07:002010-10-12T19:52:01.392-07:00I agree with your point of view about the differen...I agree with your point of view about the difference in architecture and how it changes and adapts through time. I specially love the picture because the Louvre is one of my favorite musiums and a great example of mordern meets old world. <br />Great JobJasmine Collinshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16147952474276766672noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2723293579636026186.post-36899581469492001002010-10-12T15:55:24.488-07:002010-10-12T15:55:24.488-07:00Hailey-
-I agree with all your statements of diff...Hailey-<br /><br />-I agree with all your statements of different characteristics from each civilization carrying on into others. It's very obvious that the idea of stacking and power were prominent. The Roman empire was one who went with more ideas of luxury and 'delight' and wasn't solely based on function and firmness.<br /><br />-I like your picture, I used the same one :)<br /><br />-Word count is 734: over achiever.<br /><br />Good job!Michellehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16392504697029532584noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2723293579636026186.post-51558200231742073302010-10-12T14:51:32.829-07:002010-10-12T14:51:32.829-07:00[1] watch quality of drawing. nice writing, thoug...[1] watch quality of drawing. nice writing, though. [2] a thorough exploration and good illustrations. citations?patrick lee lucashttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04150478481310659062noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2723293579636026186.post-20858014482681945482010-10-12T14:49:04.804-07:002010-10-12T14:49:04.804-07:00secrets?secrets?patrick lee lucashttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04150478481310659062noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2723293579636026186.post-81174782351434765732010-09-19T11:56:37.048-07:002010-09-19T11:56:37.048-07:00[1] nice response [2]very good [3]good hypothesizi...[1] nice response [2]very good [3]good hypothesizing [4]good comparisons [5]nice job on your observations and comment on validity.natalie lentz wallhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14455592439753428431noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2723293579636026186.post-40817914760877848302010-09-17T11:44:40.101-07:002010-09-17T11:44:40.101-07:00I think that your ideas were clearly stated and re...I think that your ideas were clearly stated and represented by your ability to tie them in with with what you learned in Patrick's class.JSimonshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04800181328910199931noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2723293579636026186.post-86430196515801221522010-09-17T06:31:56.131-07:002010-09-17T06:31:56.131-07:00I think you did a lovely job synthesizing the Theo...I think you did a lovely job synthesizing the Theories unit and the Foundations unity by drawing examples from ancient architecture.<br />I would try to draw from more sources than just Lucas and to not rely too heavily on quotes.<br />I would spend more time defining the different theories instead of just listing them.samantha.smithhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02398918642162505026noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2723293579636026186.post-86810107670479219682010-09-17T06:30:20.641-07:002010-09-17T06:30:20.641-07:00This comment has been removed by the author.samantha.smithhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02398918642162505026noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2723293579636026186.post-9165982810151362012010-09-16T23:01:49.599-07:002010-09-16T23:01:49.599-07:00Interpretation of architecture is understood throu...Interpretation of architecture is understood through past then present observations.<br />Good insight to...design is for the wellbeing of the world.<br />Deduces points but over states them.<br />Consider only one or two quotes to express points. <br />Image relates to StonehengeInterior Designerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07372266534315995309noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2723293579636026186.post-13360209911789860852010-09-15T23:25:09.545-07:002010-09-15T23:25:09.545-07:00Provides insight to how architecture defines/defin...Provides insight to how architecture defines/defined people’s lives and even raises new questions. <br />A lot of regurgitation on what the unit was about rather than what new thought processes were attained. <br />The image is very literal to what the unit was about.Carlos Smithhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15334237615278929675noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2723293579636026186.post-53715689339404780372010-09-09T09:21:37.893-07:002010-09-09T09:21:37.893-07:00[1] the robie house is a great choice for CFD but ...[1] the robie house is a great choice for CFD but it was certainly NOT the first to contain open living space. [2] nice observations on the textile. [3] ok. [4] there are certainly days where we all could take advantage of your "happy" object. nice that you deal with design issues as you analyze it.patrick lee lucashttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04150478481310659062noreply@blogger.com